After getting feedback from Straya, I did some expanding of the History and Personality section along with some tweaking of the First Person section. In the History section, I tried to mostly hit upon the episodes where Six played a major part, but please let me know if I missed something. Could you look back through it again and let me know if there's anything else I need to fix or include?
I'm trusting Straya's judgment on the Third Person section which she says I nailed. I figured since she was more experienced at this game, she'd have a definite idea of what the mods were looking for. No offense. :)
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Date: 2011-06-09 11:59 pm (UTC)I'm trusting Straya's judgment on the Third Person section which she says I nailed. I figured since she was more experienced at this game, she'd have a definite idea of what the mods were looking for. No offense. :)