Ok, now this is just me saying stuff, alright. Don't take it as ultimatum or however you spell that... SEE?!? I'm probably not the best proofreader! ANYWAY! About everything else =.=
History: You may want to clarify a bit more. Just keep in mind that a lot of the mods has never seen GenRex.
Like, when One starts turning EVO. You have that he 'changed'. Or the information about Noah. It doesn't specify what Noah was doing to be a secret kept from Rex.
Six remained ranked as the sixth most dangerous, telling Rex that they weren't ranked by fighting abilities though what precisely ranked them remains a mystery.
I KNOW THE ANSWER 8D! Six said that they weren't ranked by their skill, but by how dangerous they could be. Six also says that he was well on his way to being the most dangerous until he met Rex. Now, a prime example of this would be Dos. Dos was the first one to be ready to kill their teacher if it came to that. Plus, we all hate Dos. It's basically implied that they're ranked by how ruthless, merciless, and heartless they are. Six, of course, comes in last.
Also, a side note, Holiday is SO behind! ;; I'm going to have give her an update or something...
Personality: I think you got it down, but you may have to add more. Mine was a little longer than yours, and I ended up having to add a few paragraphs... hmmmmm. Perhaps put some more info in on his relationship with Holi and White. I would say One, too, but you got him in the history.
Then again, if you think it's good enough as is (which it is) go ahead and send it in. I'm only worried about the length, but they always give you a heads up. If something like that is the case.
First Person: .... D8 wut... what's wrong!??!?! Got me all scared, Cy! BUT it is in great format.
Third Person: I like it! Though, may want to get another eye on it. They might be looking for a different kind of situation... BUT I LIKE IT.
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History: You may want to clarify a bit more. Just keep in mind that a lot of the mods has never seen GenRex.
Like, when One starts turning EVO. You have that he 'changed'. Or the information about Noah. It doesn't specify what Noah was doing to be a secret kept from Rex.
Six remained ranked as the sixth most dangerous, telling Rex that they weren't ranked by fighting abilities though what precisely ranked them remains a mystery.
I KNOW THE ANSWER 8D! Six said that they weren't ranked by their skill, but by how dangerous they could be. Six also says that he was well on his way to being the most dangerous until he met Rex. Now, a prime example of this would be Dos. Dos was the first one to be ready to kill their teacher if it came to that.
Plus, we all hate Dos.It's basically implied that they're ranked by how ruthless, merciless, and heartless they are. Six, of course, comes in last.Also, a side note, Holiday is SO behind! ;; I'm going to have give her an update or something...
Personality: I think you got it down, but you may have to add more. Mine was a little longer than yours, and I ended up having to add a few paragraphs... hmmmmm. Perhaps put some more info in on his relationship with Holi and White. I would say One, too, but you got him in the history.
Then again, if you think it's good enough as is (which it is) go ahead and send it in. I'm only worried about the length, but they always give you a heads up. If something like that is the case.
First Person: .... D8 wut... what's wrong!??!?! Got me all scared, Cy! BUT it is in great format.
Third Person: I like it! Though, may want to get another eye on it. They might be looking for a different kind of situation... BUT I LIKE IT.