Thanks, Lina! I really appreciate you taking the time to do this!
I'll have to mull over on how to flesh out the history a little more. However, aside from those points, I'm not sure what else I could flesh out. Any other suggestions would be helpful.
Hmm...maybe I'll add that thing about the ranking system into the personality section since it seems to give a bit of insight into the kind of person Six is.
The first person thing, I figured Six would think she'd lost her memory if he talked to her and she had no clue about Caesar or other recent events. This is, of course, assuming at the time he didn't realize people could be pulled from different points in the timeline.
Thanks for the opinion on the third person thing. :D I really appreciate it and I'll see if I can't figure something else out just in case. If I do switch, I may keep what I did as a little one shot or something.
Thank you so much, Lina! :D I'll do editing once I get feedback from Rex-mun as well.
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Date: 2011-06-09 01:12 am (UTC)I'll have to mull over on how to flesh out the history a little more. However, aside from those points, I'm not sure what else I could flesh out. Any other suggestions would be helpful.
Hmm...maybe I'll add that thing about the ranking system into the personality section since it seems to give a bit of insight into the kind of person Six is.
The first person thing, I figured Six would think she'd lost her memory if he talked to her and she had no clue about Caesar or other recent events. This is, of course, assuming at the time he didn't realize people could be pulled from different points in the timeline.
Thanks for the opinion on the third person thing. :D I really appreciate it and I'll see if I can't figure something else out just in case. If I do switch, I may keep what I did as a little one shot or something.
Thank you so much, Lina! :D I'll do editing once I get feedback from Rex-mun as well.